college girl – reason to rhyme
Posted: July 3, 2012 Filed under: poetry | Tags: college girl reason 2 rhyme, poem, poetry 12 Commentslittle scribble for reason 2 rhyme
poem comparing two days in history yesterday and today…
Quiet house
Bedroom empty
The bird has tried her wingsJust you and I
And quiet times
No rockstar loudly singsDriving back
I touch your hand
pondering what her future brings
bwthoughts 
Tender flow.. riding back home to find nothing but love to drink & get drunk:)
Peace & Light
thanks — can we ever get enough love?
Love it, you must be so proud 🙂
I am thrilled… and miss her already
Must say I love this. Well done.
Our youngest will be moving out (of state) in less than 50 days. Our other daughter is returning to GA at that time.
thanks, it is sad, and wonderful when they spread their wings and fly
Lovely poem. Brings back so many memories… Thanks for stopping by my blog and for the likes! Best, Rashelle
thanks for stopping by — enjoyed your ideas on efficiency
The future. What would we do if we really could see the future? Nice poem, minimalist, sad, loving. Three lives changed as time bears them onward.
Aloha,
Doug
thanks Doug
Oh…bittersweet. Great communication of the feelings, with a minimum of words. Lovely! My favorite line is “No rockstar loudly sings” – perfect image! Thanks for sharing – can’t wait to see what else you come up with in the weeks to come!
thanks — this should be fun and a chance to polish my writing