college girl – reason to rhyme

little scribble for reason 2 rhyme

poem comparing two days in history yesterday and today…

Quiet house
Bedroom empty
The bird has tried her wings

Just you and I
And quiet times
No rockstar loudly sings

Driving back
I touch your hand
pondering what her future brings


12 Comments on “college girl – reason to rhyme”

  1. Mira Jay says:

    Tender flow.. riding back home to find nothing but love to drink & get drunk:)
    Peace & Light

  2. emjayzed says:

    Love it, you must be so proud 🙂

  3. Lori Lipsky says:

    Must say I love this. Well done.

    Our youngest will be moving out (of state) in less than 50 days. Our other daughter is returning to GA at that time.

  4. Lovely poem. Brings back so many memories… Thanks for stopping by my blog and for the likes! Best, Rashelle

  5. dmmacilroy says:

    The future. What would we do if we really could see the future? Nice poem, minimalist, sad, loving. Three lives changed as time bears them onward.

    Aloha,

    Doug

  6. kbnelson says:

    Oh…bittersweet. Great communication of the feelings, with a minimum of words. Lovely! My favorite line is “No rockstar loudly sings” – perfect image! Thanks for sharing – can’t wait to see what else you come up with in the weeks to come!


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